I agree with the statement that it is essential for young people to be able to plan and organize. I will explain my reasons in the following essay.
First and foremost, young people in this generation face much more competition than people from 100 or 200 years ago. Nowadays with international transportation and the Internet, anyone can get a job in any country. Therefore, young people are going to face the best of the world when they start to search for jobs, so they must be able to plan and organize their lives to continue to absorb new knowledge and stay competitive. Even after they get a job, they may still lose it if they cannot continue to improve upon themselves.
It is also beneficial for your mental health to plan out your life and stay organized. Since countless decisions have to be made in daily life, such as what kind of food you want to eat, what news you should take notice of, or what skill you should learn; it may often be overwhelming when all of these decisions accumulate. Planning out and organizing your life so that you have fewer decisions to do every day and have a clear path to follow, makes life less stressful and enhances your mental health.
Finally, it is extremely important for young people to have the ability to plan things out for the short, middle and long term future. Since skills and knowledge may take years to acquire, young people have to recognize what they want to achieve in the future and plan out the steps that are needed to get them there. Then, they need to organize their daily lives so that every day they are getting closer to their goals. Without meticulous planning and organizing, a goal that could be achieved in a few years may take decades instead.
In summary, whether it is for improving the competitiveness of young people, for their mental health, or to accomplish their future goals, it is essential to have the ability to plan and organize.
- TPO 54 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state sponsored Olympic teams Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 80
- TPO 48 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize 66
- Essay topics TPO 48 Integrated Writing Task 80
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, in summary, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63742690058 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48969697342 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508771929825 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1706916353 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277249456554 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104216163227 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879303132798 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175039041247 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608359445304 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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