Some people believe that it is bets to accept a bad situation such as an unsartisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. disccuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people believe that it is best to accept a hard time like unsatisfactory job or shortage of money while others argue to try and improve such situation.This essay will talk about both views and my opinion.
To begin with,there is one line which is popular among us "nothing remains for forever so does a bad situation. sometime our fate has to be like this so that we feel motivated towards our goal where we need to go with the flow and accept the situation like unsatisfactory job. For instance,i always wanted to do a job on front desk where i can face people but i got a job for spa attendant at Hyatt regency ,i could not say no to this because of some financial problem. In contrast,i had to accept the unsatisfactory job because of my financial circumstances.
On the other hand , no matter what the situation is we first need to figured out the solution we should try to change our destiny, Moreover, we should not loose our hope and move a head with all the positivity.
In my opinion, it is always better to try and improve our situation because it may result positive and our decision might change our life. For instance,my friend was doing a good paid job in Dubai but latter he was offered a big position in Big mart here in Nepal that was source of his expenditure but later he risked his financial source and came back and now he is manager at the Big mart, Consequently,he risked his financial source and his decision changed his life.
To sum up , no matter how risky our decision is try and improve your situation and go with your instinct.
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- Some people believe that it is bets to accept a bad situation such as an unsartisfactory job or shortage of money others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation disccuss both views and give your own opinion 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, so, while, as to, for instance, in contrast, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52447552448 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70198686612 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559440559441 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4090342127 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.777777778 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7777777778 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.4444444444 7.06120827912 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233291712393 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102790331066 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962533352928 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145479699221 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106481297055 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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