Nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand To what extent do you agree or disagree

In this contemporary era, due to burgeoning population demand for resources like coal, petrol, and electricity is increasing, but these resources are limited in number and thus, to meet the needs of people nuclear is considered as a good option. However, I disagree with this statement. Though, it has a lot of advantages but its detrimental effects cannot be neglected.

Nuclear energy host a lots of benefits. To begin with, it produces no polluting gases and thereby, does not contribute the greenhouse effect. For instance- during the production of fuel it does not produce carbon dioxide and this makes it eco friendly means of source. Furthermore, it employs large number of pupils and as a result, alleviate the the problem of unemployment. As this energy is based on scientific research and high technology, it help the other industries like transport industry and technicians to flourish. Last but not the least, the lifespan of power station is very much, it can last for several years.

On the other considerable side, it also cites with disadvantages. First and the foremost the waste and radioactive radiations are emitted by these plants are hazardous, which even leads to cancer and death. Also, thermal pollution affects the marine life and to elaborate this, the exposure of eggs and larvae of marine animals to this pollution, replaces the atoms of eggs with the new atom consequently, mutations in DNA occurs causing severe issues related to health. These are more accident-prone and this events may be catastrophic which can be caused because of human errors or by natural disasters. Chernobyl disaster in Ukraine took place because of humans, while Fukushima disaster (japan) arised due to earthquake and Tsunami. If these disaster happens, many people can be killed. In addition to this, the cost of implementation is very high, thus, making its difficult for poor nation to adopt this technique.

To conclude, although it is a good renewable source as it is eco-friendly, but it is very perilous as it is arduous to use it is safely.

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08849557522 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90510904237 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59587020649 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9959629553 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.470588235 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0828135819951 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0270563016645 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416210298883 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520505030785 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483292785459 0.056905535591 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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