Some people think that space travel is important for the development of humanity, while other people believe it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion
The topic of space exploration has been attracting some contradictory opinions. While many people view it as extremely positive for the progress of humankinds, others argue that it is purely wasted expenditure. I shall analyze both views and give my perspective in this essay.
On the one hand, space travelling certainly renders countless benefits to humans. First off, it helps forming another kind of travelling. Until today, people have successfully discovered every existing place on Earth and started tours and expeditions to those areas, but a journey whose destination is another planet would definitely be an anew and eye-opening experience. In addition, pollutions in water or air has become too alarming and humans are warned by specialists that one day, the condition on Earth will be too inhospitable for humans and other species to line in. That is why it is totally necessary to find a suitable planet as an alternative if we were in the worst situation.
On the other hand, it is opposed that people are spending money on space travel that turns out to be completely wasteful. Space discovery demands too much money, yet the outcome of it is not so promising or can only be achieved by large corporations like NASA, if we choose to invest those money in other fields, namely infrastructure or education, we will receive more visible effects.
In conclusion, while people occupy different viewpoints regarding space travel, I believe that this movement is worthy of money and efforts because humans need to take care of their future and the existence of future’ generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to form' or 'form'.
Suggestion: to form; form
...benefits to humans. First off, it helps forming another kind of travelling. Until today...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'those moneys', 'those monies'?
Suggestion: this money; those moneys; those monies
...tions like NASA, if we choose to invest those money in other fields, namely infrastructure ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14176245211 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89336218805 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651340996169 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.4272219496 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318558102763 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103516094293 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795054342818 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186363370822 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690904977407 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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