Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people believe that keeping old friends is more important than making new friends because they remind us of who we are, know immediately how to make you feel good when you are stressed, know everything about you, and love you anyway. However, I do not agree and think that making new friends is more important than keeping old friends for the following three reasons.
First of all, making new friends open you up to new possibilities. It is easy to get stuck in the status quo, doing what you always do with your time. But making new friends will get you out of your routine and out of creating new adventure.
Second of all, making new friends offer different perspectives. Long-time friendship typically shares similar values, interests, and perspectives. And while it is great to have similar mindsets, it is also beneficial to be challenged with your way of thinking. New friendship brings new perspectives which can enhance the way you view the world.
Third of all, making new friends teach you new things. When you make new friends, you get opportunities to be familiar with their work, religion, lifestyle, and their knowledge. That familiarity provides you an opportunity to grow further. It gives you a piece of new knowledge and helps to flourish your life.
In conclusion, I believe that it is more important to make new friends than to keep old friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, however, if, second, so, third, while, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 235.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90212765957 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70054904466 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544680851064 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 618.680645161 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2677409128 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2857142857 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471366239751 0.236089414692 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183223427829 0.076458572812 240% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117343162284 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29699303882 0.150856017488 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955146101755 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.