The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over last year.
The line graph illustrates the earnings ò four different types of cafe (The Tea Room, Internet Express, Wi-Fi Cafe and Cafe Cool) in New York in the previous year.
Overall, while the income of the Tea Room witnessed a downward trend, this figure for other three kinds of cafe showed an upward trend.
The earnings of the Tea Room was higher than that of the others with exactly 160000 dollar in January, falling significantly to under 50000 dollar at the end of the previous year.
On the other hand, there was a steady increase in the income of Internet Express from exactly 100000 dollar in January to 140000 dollar in December. Likewise, the earings of Wi-Fi cafe quadrupled to about 190000 dollar in December, starting at under 60000 dollar. This figure for Cafe Cool started at the lowest income of a range of 30000 dollar in January, which was followed by a skyrocket to 120000 dollar in December.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
... that of the others with exactly 160000 dollar in January, falling significantly to un...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...y, falling significantly to under 50000 dollar at the end of the previous year. On th...
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Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...of Internet Express from exactly 100000 dollar in January to 140000 dollar in December...
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Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...ctly 100000 dollar in January to 140000 dollar in December. Likewise, the earings of W...
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Line 4, column 212, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...f Wi-Fi cafe quadrupled to about 190000 dollar in December, starting at under 60000 do...
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Line 4, column 256, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...ar in December, starting at under 60000 dollar. This figure for Cafe Cool started at t...
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Line 4, column 339, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...t the lowest income of a range of 30000 dollar in January, which was followed by a sky...
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Line 4, column 402, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...h was followed by a skyrocket to 120000 dollar in December.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74050632911 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33712333639 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550632911392 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.6350564709 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.833333333 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210243322207 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107708014627 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108071954333 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140735703531 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119122176468 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.