Leaders like John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to the people of the US. Name another world leader you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
Whenever we mention Martin Luther King, we can not forget that he followed the same principles followed by Mahatma Gandhi. So in my view work done by Mahatma Gandhi is enormous and important not only to India, but also to the whole world.
Mahatma Gandhi practised non-violence throught his life. He wanted the the independence of India only by non-violence. Most importantly, he made it happen with his marches. I vividly remember this chapter from the history book about him marching for the increased taxes of the salt. It was called Dandi march- Dandi comes from the name of the town to where h...
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