The reading passage and the lecture are talking about presence of lines in fossils of s dinosaur called Sinosauropteryx. These lines might incidates that this dinosau rmight had feathers. The writer critices the concept that dinosaur had feathers witj several evidence. However, the lecturer says, the evidences that dinosaur had feathers are very strong.
To begin with, the author states, these line might be skin decompostion find after dinosaur died and buied. This statement is contradicts by professor. She mentions, we can not see any decomposition of skin in any other animals lived in that area. therefore, these line should not be from composition of skin.
In addition, the author asserts, these lines might be not remnant of feathers. they might be from other part of body like frills. The lecturer in the other hand refutes this point. She says that there is a different between material remain from decomposition of feather than that from frills. Fibers remain from feather contain creatine materials which is not present in frills. As a result, this lines notb from decomposition of frills as the passage says.
Finally, the author suggests, feathers used for flying and ti keep warm body tempreture. Dinosaus did not need to keep his body warm. moreover, it can not be fly. The professor has a opposite idea. She contends, there is another function for feather rather than used to fly or save temperature. There are many types of animals do not fly and have feathers like backak. This animal use feather to attract other for mate. Dinosaure might use their feather with orange and white to mate.
The reading passage and the lecture are talking about presence of lines in fossils of s dinosaur called Sinosauropteryx. These lines might incidates that this dinosaur might had feathers. The writer critices the concept that dinosaur had feathers witj several evidence. However, the lecturer says, the evidences that dinosaur had feathers are very strong.
To begin with, the author states, these line might be skin decompostion find after dinosaur died and buied. This statement is contradicts by professor. She mentions, we can not see any decomposition of skin in any other animals lived in that area. therefore, these line should not be from composition of skin.
In addition, the author asserts, these lines might be not remnant of feathers. they might be from other part of body like frills. The lecturer in the other hand refutes this point. She says that there is a differnt between material remain from decomposition of feather than that from frills. Fibers remain from feather contain creatine materials which is not present in frills. As a result, this lines notb from decomposition of frills as the passage says.
Finally, the author suggests, feathers used for flying and ti keep warm body tempreture. Dinosaus did not need to keep his body warm. moreover, it can not be fly. The professor has a opposite idea. She contends, there is another function for feather rather than used to fly or save temperature. There are many types of animals do not fly and have feathers like backak. This animal use feather to attract other for mate. Dinosaure might use their feather with orange and white to mate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The reading passage and the lecture are ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun evidence seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some evidence'.
Suggestion: some evidence
...concept that dinosaur had feathers witj several evidence. However, the lecturer says, the eviden...
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...s, these line might be skin decompostion find after dinosaur died and buied. This...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...n any other animals lived in that area. therefore, these line should not be from composit...
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Suggestion: They
...lines might be not remnant of feathers. they might be from other part of body like ...
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...s. they might be from other part of body like frills. The lecturer in the other h...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...aus did not need to keep his body warm. moreover, it can not be fly. The professor has a...
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Suggestion: an
...r, it can not be fly. The professor has a opposite idea. She contends, there is a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, talking about, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 268.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0223880597 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56555833148 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544776119403 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 21.2450331126 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8003599014 49.2860985944 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.1818181818 110.228320801 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1818181818 21.698381199 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 7.06452816374 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452121256166 0.272083759551 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130073166787 0.0996497079465 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15072475667 0.0662205650399 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303390161615 0.162205337803 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.292667752566 0.0443174109184 660% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.3589403974 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.0289183223 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.498013245 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.