The given diagram represents a wave-energy machine and the optimum place it should be located. The machine itself consists of various modules and tools and is divided into two chambers based on the air flow and wave input.
The two turbines play a significant role in the machine. They are connected together in such a way that they are facing opposite sides. They control the flow of the air that enters the machine from both the chambers.
The machine has two valves at the top that administer the air flow that is entering and exiting the machine. These valves are located above the generator and turbines. The bottom half of the machine has a section where it traps the waves that enter the system and two vents that part the two chambers and allow air flow.
The upper body of the machine consists of an electricity generator and a valve that acts as a doorway for air to enter and encounter the turbine which consequently shifts the direction of the flow of the said air in such a way that the air exits into the water levels or water collected in the bottom part of the machine.
The lower half of the machine takes in the wave through the chamber locate below . The water collected forces a burst of air into the turbine which, like before, alters the flow direction so that the air exits through the valve placed above the turbine, into the atmosphere.
The output of the machines is directly proportional to the length of the waves it works with. But, the installation costs are increasing with the output production. Hence, the location selection should be selected based on the requirements of the user. Customers who desire heavy budget combined with high output rates should install their machines deep in the sea where the waves are large and vice versa.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ased on the air flow and wave input. The two turbines play a significant role in...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d in the bottom part of the machine. The lower half of the machine takes in the ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...he wave through the chamber locate below . The water collected forces a burst of a...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...wave through the chamber locate below . The water collected forces a burst of air i...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve the turbine, into the atmosphere. The output of the machines is directly prop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.15609756098 444% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 965.302439024 152% => OK
No of words: 312.0 196.424390244 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71794871795 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3768078526 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 106.607317073 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477564102564 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 283.868780488 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9915819547 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1333333333 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151244197046 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621106257972 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550564493271 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819846872211 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435443423384 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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