Science is very vast term. so earlier research made by scientist and on that basis new theory implemented, so it's continuous cycle. I Partially agree with first statement suggest that scientific discoveries have given much better understanding of the world around us. disagree with next statement suggest that science has revealed to us that world is infinitely more complex than even we realized.
There are several example, shows that science discoveries gives much better understanding of the world around us. Let us take an example in automobile sector,the implementation began from buggi to petrol operated two wheeler bikes and now e-bikes which requires an electricity which reduces an pollution of environment. This implements an science discover to human in benefical way.
Secondly, there are number of things which human can use but he might unknown how to convert in more useful ways, example if electricity available to anyone, it may cost bill for monthly consumption, rather how will convert this amount into saving. The new concept solar energy introduce which may take energy from sun and store into solar pannel. an electric arrangement it may convert an solar energy in electrical energy. There are number of discoveries which are unknown to human and which after implication may fits beneficial.
Second statement, science revealed world more infinitely complex than ever we recognised. research or dicoveries are need of everyone.according to me research and discoveries never be complex,even though it's look like complex but if you have curiosity and more intrest then nothing complex to seem.
secondly, if your thinking level bounded by certain limit, then growth, knowledge, and personal skill may not develope. instead person ability to think contradicted, more complex more person involve and he more think on the topic thoroughly. It's unstoppable process, one can not restrict himself on basis easy or complex thinks. Even though you fail to understand some think rethink on it get clear idea and move ahead.
To sum up with all, according to me science have varieties of field in which number innovation, the things are going changes. It's not complex instead you have update yourself with science, so that you are also part of some research.
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- Many Important discoveries or creations are accidental it is usally while seeking the answer to one question that we come across the answer to another 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 363.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29752066116 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80331693866 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561983471074 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2659136836 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.210526316 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0198202735619 0.243740707755 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00584864477876 0.0831039109588 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0100581891578 0.0758088955206 13% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0119284614368 0.150359130593 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010513549553 0.0667264976115 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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