You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to
• explain the reason why you decline the offer
• express you gratitude
• explain you like your current job very much
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the job offer I have been offered for Media Manager position at your New York office. Although I was flattered and it was an honor for me to get this opportunity, unfortunately I have to decline it.
I have to say that I was really impressed with the offer that I have received and I am grateful for the time you spend on checking my resume and portfolio. I have heard a lot of positive comments about your work environment and the professionalism among your employees. With that said, it was a really difficult decision and it took me a week to weight in my option. But at the end I have decided to continue my work with my current employer.
I have some in progress projects that I want to finish before I can continue my career with another company. Although, this is my main reason to not accepting your offer but I have to say that your offered salary is below my current income and I have to take that in consideration as well. But I hope we can be in contact for any feature opportunity.
Yours faithfully,
Ehsan Majd
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41747572816 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69854015268 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558252427184 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.6201748092 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140625178557 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518855849668 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533994451143 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973060336855 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023867513647 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.