What makes someone admirable?
In the 7-billion-people world, each person has different lifestyles with various purposes. Some of them have their own qualities which makes others admire and respect them. According to the topic, I would like to share my view of the reasons that make someone admirable.
An admirable person is also known as a role model in many aspects, depending on personal criteria. In my first opinion, a role model is supposed to have good behaviors which are a top priority. This is because a person who is well-mannered and kind will receive a respectful look from other people. In addition, being sociable and confident can help them improve their work and connect with other relationships.
Another opinion is that an admirable person is well-educated and has a deep understanding of a specific subject, such as business, art, sports, sociology, etc. Besides, they are also very good at communication skills which are considered to be an important key in the current society.
Not only are their personalities but role models also have a right attitude toward lives. The reason for making someone admirable is that they have a determination and perseverance in working and pursuing goals. The most important thing is the dedication of achievements to their lives. Moreover, they are always patient and optimistic in bad situations. These characteristics can be shown in the way of confronting adversity and succeeding in completing their aims. In my perspective, my father is a suitable example for this topic. Basically, my father is not a hero or a famous person; however, he is a meaningful man in my life. The reason is that my father has made a great effort to build a comfortable and happy family. His strength helps him to suffer from pain and difficulties over the years. Therefore, my father inspires his daughters to have a resolve to achieve our goals and passions.
In conclusion, there are many different criteria to consider someone to be an admirable person. Whether that is an excellent doctor or your normal family member, each person has their own value and they deserve to have respect from others. Maybe, we are role models for someone else that makes them have motivation in their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02445652174 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93719581742 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3352092054 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.0454545455 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31818181818 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160702308419 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519937554062 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862477160275 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110914968525 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751293758542 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.67 Out of 6
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