some people believe that climate has the greatest effect on people's life. Others believe the economy of the region has the greatest effect.
It is believed by some that climate has the most significant effect on people's lives, while other believe that economy is the most important factor. I believe that good economy and balance the fact of the climate.
Many people think that the climate plays the greatest role in defining people's way of life. This is because climate of a region decides the food, houses, jobs, and clothing of people. For example, in cold regions such as Antarctica, ice fishing is one of the occupations of people who live there. Whereas in warm countries like India agriculture is the most common occupation. Moreover, the climate of the region also influences the type of food people consume. For instance, bread is the common food in western countries, while rice is the most common food in eastern countries.
On the other hand, those who believe economy is the prime factors say that because economy decides the quality of living conditions. Economic frames choices and decisions people make regarding work travel, health, leisure activities and so on. For example, in rich and developed countries, people tend to spend more as the government can provide social security in the form of pensions and health care, whereas in the poor countries people tend to save more. Similarly developed countries with good economy have more educated workforce and thus their citizens secure better jobs, while in developing countries people are seen employed as labor.
In past, I used to believe that the climate has the greatest effect on the lives of people, but today, the impact of the climate can be limited by a good economy. The biggest evidence of this can be seen in the oil-rich middle East countries, who have established modern cities in the middle of deserts with the help of the rich economics. The people of these countries have same lifestyle as people of any other developed country, despite the region's harsh climate.
To sum up, the climate of a region has impact on people's way of life. However, I would argue that economy affects people's way of living much more than that of climate.
- People aim to achieve the balance between their work and lives but few people achieve it What are the causes of the problems How to overcome it 84
- Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student s field of study 75
- Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today 58
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition 50
- The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers artists or scientists but by the general welfare of its people 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In the past
...s people are seen employed as labor. In past, I used to believe that the climate has...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9375 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44129816393 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491477272727 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0126031511 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.235294118 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443470370897 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141531435798 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115645064542 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256124822479 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914535034274 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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