Đề 04 : Some people claim that the media has a negative influence on contemporary society. They think that there is little tolerance for new ideas because of its impact .
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people popularly believe that mass media negatively direct impact on ordinary lives. It is unacceptable to tolerate for modern opinions or alternative views. However, I firmly support the other side of this statement that media positively affect the ways people typically thinking and make culture more diverse because of the development of new and creative trends.
Social media generously help develop a tolerance for different ways of thinking. This in common is because nowadays, it is easy for us to access human knowledge or daily news through various types of media including document films, headline news, journal, radio, video … It helps not merely to merely expand sensitive human’s look but also increase the flexible and acceptably in the perspective’s people.
On top of that, the mass media diverse culture by boosting new and original trends in society. Mixing artform basic colors, updating hot trends, the young possess many interesting ideas for the development of the fashion industry. For example, Vietnamese teens merged their fashion with those in America.
In conclusion, the mass media expand human’s perspective and generate the ways of people thinking become tolerant. Besides that life becomes beautiful because of the diverse and interesting culture through the mass media.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, so, as for, for example, in conclusion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51231527094 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6804095952 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650246305419 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.6913293665 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.9 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229777494398 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905011190285 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407945318051 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13594415013 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664487689374 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.