If you could meet a famous person, who would that be and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
“Think like a queen. A queen is not afraid to fail. Failure is a stepping stone to greatness”- Oprah Winfrey.
A famous personality I would love to meet would surely and definitely be Oprah Winfrey. The most influential woman of the 20th century, talk show host to the show “The Oprah Winfrey Show” which had a running period of 25years, TV producer, author, actress and philanthropist.
Oprah Winfrey was one such individual who I had no relation to and yet who was someone I adored, looked upto and is my icon even till today.
Oprah, even though had it rough in the early years of her life but being an eloquent speaker, became the first ever black woman billionaire and one of the greatest philanthropist and influencer in history.
Her show not only focused on interviewing celebrities but also emphasised on literature, self motivation, mindfulness and spirituality.
In the 90’s era where the gender equality movement had just kicked in and also growing up in a family being the only girl amongst my brothers, Oprah was one such powerful woman who made me believe and also quoted, “ The only courage anybody ever needs, is the courage to dream.” This ultimately led me to chase my dream and today I not only am living my dream but enjoying ever bit of it.
I would be obliged if I get to meet Oprah Winfrey even if was for a few seconds, even if I had to just say, “Thank you”.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70682730924 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72369702934 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582329317269 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.687800632 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.2 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11135098485 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510032281569 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835809738377 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520609931523 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509431700807 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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