Annual Rainfall in Kona Hawaii The graph and table below show the average monthly rainfalls and average annual rainfalls for three towns in the district of Kona in Hawaii for a 30 year period 1971 2000 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting

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Annual Rainfall in Kona, Hawaii

The graph and table below show the average monthly rainfalls and average annual rainfalls for three towns in the district of Kona in Hawaii for a 30-year period (1971-2000).

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words

Submitted by JAY9923 on Sat, 09/04/2021 - 17:04

The graph and table below show the average monthly rainfalls and average annual rainfalls for three towns in the district of Kona in Hawaii for a 30-year period (1971-2000) which are Kainaliu, Opihihale and Holualoa .Out of these 3, Kainaliu gets the maximum average yearly rainfall.

As illustrated by the graph and , it is seen that the town Kainaliu receives the peak rainfall in the months July and September. As per the graphical information, Kainaliu rainwater is on a steady rise post February to attain the maxima at around 17cm in the months ranging between July to September. Post-September months mostly record a plummet in the precipitation amount to reach as low as approximately 05 cm in December.

Holualoa records lesser rainfall rainfall as compared to Kainaliu but more in comparison to Opihihale in the years between 1971 and 200. It records heavy precipitation intermittently as reflected by the chart where it gets approximately 11cm of rains in June, April and October, with the maximum rains in July exceeding 12cm. Post-October, the charts reflect a constant decline in the centimeters of rain falling and the lowest is recorded in December (6.9cm approximately).

Average annual rainfall is the lowest for Opihihale. It shows an anomaly when its precipitation increases to 9cm in February but falls till April. It shows a meager rise in the amount of precipitation throughout the next five months to attain the summit of nearly 10.5 cm in September only to see a steep dip in the coming winter months.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...next five months to attain the summit of nearly 10.5 cm in September only to see ...
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...steep dip in the coming winter months.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09126984127 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97152772736 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3650570622 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.3 76.5299724578 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 16.8248392259 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 4.34317383033 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 7.41237113402 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377038221444 0.216113520407 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146872987236 0.0766984524023 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.20563232811 0.0603063233224 341% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247787396337 0.12726935374 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.240006505886 0.0580467560999 413% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 8.37731958763 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ich are Kainaliu, Opihihale and Holualoa .Out of these 3, Kainaliu gets the maxim...
^^
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Out
...h are Kainaliu, Opihihale and Holualoa .Out of these 3, Kainaliu gets the maximum ...
^^^
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e and Holualoa .Out of these 3, Kainaliu gets the maximum average yearly rainfall...
^^
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...fall. As illustrated by the graph and , it is seen that the town Kainaliu rece...
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Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the graph and , it is seen that the town Kainaliu receives the peak rainfall in t...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... rise post February to attain the maxima at around 17cm in the months ranging bet...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r. Post-September months mostly record a plummet in the precipitation amount to r...
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Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: rainfall
...n December. Holualoa records lesser rainfall rainfall as compared to Kainaliu but more in com...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hart where it gets approximately 11cm of rains in June, April and October, with ...
^^
Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts approximately 11cm of rains in June, April and October, with the maximum rain...
^^
Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...next five months to attain the summit of nearly 10.5 cm in September only to see ...
^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...steep dip in the coming winter months.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09126984127 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97152772736 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3650570622 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.3 76.5299724578 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 16.8248392259 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 4.34317383033 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 7.41237113402 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377038221444 0.216113520407 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146872987236 0.0766984524023 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.20563232811 0.0603063233224 341% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247787396337 0.12726935374 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.240006505886 0.0580467560999 413% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 8.37731958763 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.