Although nowadays, travelling become a passion of many people. In addition to that some individual opine that travelling in group will is more convenient to them while other feel more comfortable in travelling alone. I think everyone is independent to do whatever they like. but I reckon travelling in group or with someone else is more joyful. This essay will delve deeper into matter further and reach to logical conclusion in the end.
To begin with, there are many loopholes of travelling alone such as, individual can do limited fun alone whereas in the group their is chance to try new things and unlimited fun with squad and create lots of memories as well as there will be some funny incident will happen also get opportunity to do prank on squad members. Moreover, nowadays travelling become so expensive individual cannot afford without good source of income so that if we choose to travel in group then the expenses get divide in member conversely there will be more support and less risk for instance in any emergency individual get more support to overcome to circumstances but if person is travelling alone then he will not get support of anyone and it become quite hard to tackle alone .
On the other hand, how to plan the trip also plays indispensable role if trip is planned by single person then there will be few venues to visit whereas planning in group the number of ideas comes in every mind which makes trip more exciting by dint of there will be variety of suggestion. Furthermore, before trip there are number of things to manage and it will tough to manage for single person but in group the work gets divide in all members and less to worry about managing stuffs for example tickets, accommodation, gathering details of place where to go and any more things.
In conclusion, I prefer to travelling in group instead of alone because in group there will be creation of many glorious memories.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78078078078 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55292152194 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537537537538 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.574331274 48.9658058833 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.2 100.406767564 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3 20.6045352989 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.9 5.45110844103 383% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191945004022 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853071078188 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515698371546 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125925705552 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583583160592 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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