You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have some problems and can’t stay for the whole course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out whether a refund is possible if you leave early Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement, which was published in a newspaper a few days ago, where it showed that your tennis academy is offering a short tennis course.
Last week, I was surfing the internet. Fortunately, I came across this post and came to know that you are inviting the applicants for learning intermediate to advance level of Tennis. As I am sporting enthusiastic, I would like to enroll in the Summer Session. It would be beneficial for me to enhance my knowledge
in this field.
However, when I checked the full details, I came to know that it is a five-week course, which could be a bit difficult for me since I would have to return to my country after three weeks. I have got four weeks' vacation from my job which I am planning to utilize in learning tennis.
Therefore, I was just wondering if you allow me to join the course with some sort of guarantee that I would get a partial refund for my course. Otherwise, you can make special arrangements so that I can finish the course in four weeks.
I hope you will take my matter into your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
John Martin.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62019230769 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76992763 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0061980041 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3636363636 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22631147626 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07770594229 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596203167971 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117559383708 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646450921835 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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