Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed

These days, numerous individuals select to be self-employed instead of working for a company ar organisation because of several reasons. This essay will discuss possible reasons of this case and some drawbacks of self-employment.

There are various reasons of being self-employed which borders on starting own business. First and foremost, working as a freelance or owning a business which considered as types of self-employment allows people more freedom to do assignments perfectly and earn their livings according to their own pace and conditions rather than being subordinate to someone. Furthermore, there are some people who are independent-minded to work with others and follow their orders and have difficulties to seek reconcile. Additionally, some people are over-industrious and calculating due to their gifted talents who want to launch their own ideas passionately.

The benefits of self-employment is notwithstanding, there are also some considerable drawbacks of being your own bos. Chief among these is the matter of regular payment. Large organisations guarantee the regular salary. As a self-employed individual, however, that guarantee vanishes. Another one is to shoulder all responsibilities. If something goes wrong, incomings stop with you. Your decision may be good ones, but sitting on a boss chair may be more stressful than you predicted. Personal discipline is another factor to consider. To succeed as an independent business owner, you have to set your own goals, deadlines and schedules. Some people prosper when they answer only to themselves while others find hard without a manager to crack the whips.

To conclude, it is obvious that there are several reasons and downsides of being your own boss. In my point of view, it really depends on individual's character, preference between being a leader or employee and private initiative.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55400696864 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34004795023 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613240418118 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.9284690833 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5555555556 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9444444444 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358426299123 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100503371284 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100638689383 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223523374294 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676269709504 0.056905535591 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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