The table chart shows the information about the expenses person of retired single person and couple person in Australia for their comfortable of their lifestyle.
more and more people are using technological gadget so they believe that there is no need to print books magazines and newspapers do you agree or disagree and give your opinion .
The given table chart depicts, the information about the expenses per person of retired single person as well as a couple in Australia, for comfortable of their lifestyle. The data is given in dollars.
The housing expenses of single person who is retired 160 dollars which are less as compared to couple retired. Dollars 284 are housing expenses why two persons who are retired. Shopping related expenses of single and two persons are $35 and $50 respectively. single person's food expensive per week are dollar 55 and dollar 70 food expenses of two person who are retired. the clothing expenses of one person per week h 67 dollar which are less as compared to couple retired.
the shelter expenses of couple retired for month are 110 dollars which are 18 dollars more than single person retired. health and other expenses of single person are $64 and 17 $7 respectively and 77 dollar and 223 dollar expenses which are related health and other things of couple retired. the total expenses per week of single person are dollar 650 which are less as compared to couple retired and dollar 934 total expenses of 2 person who are retired.
Overall, it clearly seen that total expenses per week of couple retired person are more as compared to single retired person for their comfortable livestyle in Australia.
In this contemporary era, more and more individuals are using technological gadgets such as computers mobile phones to assess vast information but it argues that due to electronic devices there is no need to print books, magazines and newspapers. I completely disagree with aforementioned statement and I will elaborate it in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, mobile phones and computers are become a part and parcel of our lifes. Everyone become addicted and depend on these devices. in modern approach, mostly people prefer to electronic devices to assess information due to reason it easier. On the contrary, there are many disadvantages. First and foremost; these devices affect our health specially eyesight. Due to the fact that, when people spend their more time on their electronic devices then the light of screen affect their eyesight. Apart from that, lack of concentration because when individual search online to assess knowledge then they do not concentrate on their work or study. Due to several social media apps such as WhatsApp, Facebook, Instagram and so on.
Moreover, when they read newspapers and other prints than they improve their reading skills but in case of computers and mobile phones, they do not improve their reading skill. Further more on the internet people do not obtain was knowledge rather than books and so on. Consequently, these devices affect a person's mental and physical growth. books are important as compared to mobile phones as well as computers, because children do not use mobile phones in schools. So, in this case, books are significant rather than mobile phones. in addition to that individuals become more addicted to these devices. With this, when people search on the internet for their topics and studies, then they do not receive knowledge related their topics because on the internet limited information available.
To recapitulate, in my opinion, it is harmful in some cases, when people across information on the internet because it put effects on eyesight and physical growth. So books, newspapers and magazines also equally important for individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Single
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
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Suggestion: dollars
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Suggestion: Health
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Suggestion: people; persons
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2873.0 1615.20841683 178% => OK
No of words: 560.0 315.596192385 177% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13035714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.8645985582 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6618951119 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.403571428571 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 900.9 506.74238477 178% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5311910708 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.4128256513 410% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.460947341958 0.244688304435 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115322733391 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119917769972 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232621312891 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127621996283 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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