Global warming has become one of the biggest concerns all around the world. It is an undeniable fact that activities of mankind have caused this problem. This essay discusses the reason behind this phenomenon and explores the measures we need to take to keep things under control.
One of the compelling reasons for warming the earth is human activities which cause higher carbon foot print. In the past few years, carbon emission rate has soared at an alarming rate due to relentless burning of fossil fuel, resulting higher concentration of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, which is the driving factor for the warming of the globe. While above facts have caused increased production of greenhouse gasses, destroying eco system has interrupted the natural process of absorbing these harmful substances from the atmosphere, driving this condition to another level. Eco systems such as forests contribute overwhelmingly to regulate greenhouse gases, however, forests are being destroyed at an alarming rate.
Reducing carbon emission is the key to tackle this problem and going for green energy can be pointed out as a most viable solution. For example, giant vehicle manufacturers such as Tesla have already started making electric vehicles which can operate with zero carbon footprint. Alternatively, going for solar energy or using wind for generating electricity are also can be considered as better solutions. While reducing carbon emissions, it is also vital than accelerating natural carbon absorption processes by restoring natural eco systems, especially by reforestation.
In conclusion, higher amount of carbon emission and disturbing natural processes have caused rising temperature in the atmosphere. Reducing greenhouse gas emission and restoring the natural processes can be pointed out as effective solutions to this problem.
- Some people believe the purpose of education is to prepare people to be useful members for society Others say that the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults 67
- Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society To what extent do you agree 73
- The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods To what extent do you agree 73
- The average standard of people s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5871886121 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8669760069 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3215114275 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.769230769 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141034461912 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586629608486 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445483174237 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993110376628 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418356968587 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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