You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The charts depict the comparation of the aged group populations between France and India in 1984.
As can be seen from two charts, the young age group was a majority in Indian's age structure in 1984. While in France, it was adult age group 30-35.
First things first, the number of children in India was exceeded the rates in France with the former taking up 7% and the latter occupying 3.5% in 0-5 years old in particularly. By contract, in 30-35 age group, the figure for India adult who was 30-35 years old was fewer than French by 0.5%. Another point to mentioned is that the rate of elderly poplation is France was higher than Indian. Turning more into details, the number of elderly people in France was threefold than Indian. The last point is mentioned is that French population reached into higher than 85 years old which was not happened in India population.
Overall, it is noticable that there are two general trend of aged structure between India and France population.
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'trends'?
Suggestion: trends
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'trend' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'trends'.
Suggestion: trends
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e between India and France population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75581395349 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.355447755 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546511627907 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2112579455 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8888888889 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140504638348 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776260895122 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697894314461 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131857012137 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737287674189 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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