Drugs appears to be salient which are being advocated by youngsters. Nevertheless, a massive clan assume that smoking needs to be banned, in contrast other's justify, that might not be a fruitful advice. Meanwhile, this attempt would be talked over regarding both the vistas, along with my own judgement in the looming portion.
To commence with, the top tier motive beyond this storyline that is health. To be precise, it is a undeniable fact that health is real wealth, but if one becomes addicted to smoking then this venture must be destroyed his livelihood, by giving him indifferent classification of disease.
Foregoing analysis, the second bullet point needs to be wastage of money. Inshort, a copious of folks have been spent their hard earnings on these things. However, they could be utilized the cash to manufacture their own assets. 'Let's' say, in USA, a man had been taken a taugh call to save his money, rather than purchasing drugs and after a couple of years, he bought his dream car.
Conversely, a wee group counter that reek should not be restricted. Having said that, it seems like a stress buster for numerous of inhabitants, due to their robotic schedule. Not to mention, it might be not a attainable task for them to quit this grubby habit which gives them relief from their hectic timetable.
To recapitulate, both kingpin's have their own opinion, but according to my facts and perception. The smoking business ought to be prohibited, due to it's messy aftermath.
- SOME PEOPLE PREFER TO SPEND THEIR LIFES DOING THE SAME THINGS AND AVOIDING CHANGE OTHERS HOWEVER THINK THAT CHANGE IS ALWAYS A GOOD THINK DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION 78
- Many people say smoking should be banned and some say it is not a good idea What is your opinion on this 61
- SOME PEOPLE PREFER TO SPEND THEIR LIFES DOING THE SAME THINGS AND AVOIDING CHANGE OTHERS HOWEVER THINK THAT CHANGE IS ALWAYS A GOOD THINK DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION 89
- Topic Some people say patriotism is the biggest cause of war But others believe that people are patriotic they are more likely to take an interest in a country s day to day running and therefore less likely to allow unscrupulous politicians to drive a cou 11
- Many adults nowadays prefer spending their free time playing computer games why do they do this Is this positive or negative development 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'fruitful advice'.
Suggestion: fruitful advice
...trast others justify, that might not be a fruitful advice. Meanwhile, this attempt would be talke...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ne that is health. To be precise, it is a undeniable fact that health is real wea...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...e cash to manufacture their own assets. Lets say, in USA, a man had been taken a tau...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hedule. Not to mention, it might be not a attainable task for them to quit this g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96414342629 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71377624623 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673306772908 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5501075768 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183381751602 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582416226997 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331510939757 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948102844195 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232098115461 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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