Some people believe that death penalty is the best method for those who committed violent crimes. Other people think that this measure is not appropriate in today’s world. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Questions of cruel crimes and appropriate punishments have always been relevant for humanity. Some people believe that death sentence is inappropriate in modern world while others defend such drastic options. Although death penalty can be used as preventive measure, I believe that due to judicial errors it must be forbidden.
On the one hand, an illustrative example of the brutal crimes’ consequences stops new violent acts in future. The reason for this is that a fierce demonstration of government force is thought-provoking for some individuals attached to atrocities and under fear of their own death they will avoid breaking the law. Therefore, death penalty is a mechanism for liming delinquency. For example, AM news reports that crime rates have downward tendency in some states of America where death sentence is applied. In other words, proper court judgement is an attempt to reduce violence.
On the other hand, probability of court mistakes makes this method of punishment unacceptable. This is because, there is no way of realise a prisoner who was unfairly condemned to death, person’s life can not be return. Hence, execution of the sentence may eventually lead to another tragedy. For instance, Stinny Gorge was 14 years old when he was killed on the electric chair and only 70 years after was young man justified posthumously. Thus, death penalty has no use without perfectly working judicial system.
Even though, death sentence is beneficial to intimidation of offenders, I am of the opinion that it inevitably causes execution of innocent people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31075697211 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95426318891 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669322709163 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7548414137 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2142857143 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260333042265 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789756117155 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506422823619 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138043521975 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659783155532 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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