You live in the USA and your family has a spare room to rent out to a student. Write a letter to the accommodation officer of the University of America.
In the letter:-
- Describe the room
-Describe the type of tenant you won't
- Give information about your family and the rent that you expect to charge.
Dear sir,
I am Sandy, residing in 19 hill street near the University of America. I am inscribing this missive to inform you about the spare room in my home to let in a student. It is about 9 km away from your institution, in the centre of city.
This room is equipped with the various kind of advanced appliances like television, microwave and a lot more. Onviously, this is neat and clean, having a separate door for the independence of student. All the amenities can be enjoyed like ventilation, couch, bed, washroom and a study table. I am also ready to provide any other if required by pupil.
I specifically want to have an Asian student as I and my family are; which will be easy to befriend us. Here I must mention that I would prefer if a student is female since I have better experience with female tenants as they are more sincere and responsible than that of boys.
Lastly, I would like to add that total rent would be dollar 500 monthly including water and electricity bill. Cleaner's bill will be paid by herself only if wants to obtain this facility the address and my contact number are attached to this letter.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely
Sandy Georgia.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bill' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'bills'.
Suggestion: bills
...monthly including water and electricity bill. Cleaners bill will be paid by herself ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to hearing from you. Your sincerely Sandy Georgia.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, look, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54377880184 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57617288579 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654377880184 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4415520844 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8461538462 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179198708549 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576855025898 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538755122075 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873655115089 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677235880893 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.