Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local customs and behaviors. Other people disagree; they think the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.
Due to globalization, local traditions and rituals spreading around the world, many people are knowing the other culture by travelling to other countries. Individuals believe that commuters should follow the customs and beliefs of the countries they are visiting. however, some oppose that nations should accept the culture diversity. In this essay, I will discuss the both perspectives and give my opinion.
Nowadays, travelling to other countries is much popular than past. many conceive that visitors should maintain the local beliefs while roaming around the world. Firstly, if they follow the traditional rituals, cultural activities could long last and people of that nation would be happy for these improvement. Secondly, travelers can understand the processes and way of the living of local residents. For instance, international travelers would tell about their travel memory while they return to their nations back. In the result, there would more frequent travelers to that country.
on the other hand, people should convey the different culture. So, they can at least understand the different living style. Moreover, travelling experience would be far more excellent for visitors. They can travel freely around the nation and if visitor happy, then there would be more growth of travel industry and economy development. There would be win-win situation for both; people of host country and visitors.
To conclude, I reiterate that both has their own advantages and disadvantages. Therefore, I believe that people should welcome the every traditions and behaviors in their country to make this world more peaceful and more happier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, at least, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55335968379 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6888512031 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553359683794 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4311354521 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6470588235 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8823529412 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292813318998 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974517650049 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782592058911 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195919522721 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811413711341 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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