Many people say that smoking is the main reason for numerous deaths every year so they want it to be banned. Definitely, they have their own valid points, but i just partly agree with this point for some reasons.
First of all, smoking cause a lot of diseases, in my country, there is a huge number of lung cancer cases are recorded and almost of patient said that they smoke regularly. Ultimately it hurts not only people who smoke but also people surrounding as well as makes the asmotphere in the public buildings become worse. Moreover, they waste their money because of smoking. For instance, Viet nam is the country that people have medium income just aruond 8 dollars a day and one eighth of them is spent on tobacco( in case they smoking regularly). Furthermore, the diseases that the smoking people could get can affect their productivity of work negatively, they can receive demotion, salary decrease,...etc.
On the other hand, cigarettes and tobacco are also ought not to be prohibited \because of its advantages, we can not deny the benefit which the industry of produce cigarettes and tobacco can bring for us. They genetare a hundread thounsand of jobs for people and play a considerable role in the economy of some countries, if we completely ban it, these people will become unemployed and make big problems for goverments. Honestly, everyone has their own hobby, some people love playing sports or reading books, presumably, it is good habit, but if they choose smoking as a habit, it will be okay because that is the way in which they can have fun.
we can conclude that smooking has wide range of disadvantages but we can not ban it because of their role in our society.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Many people know about the disadvantages of smoking,...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ountry, a number of lung cancer cases is recorded every year, almost of them are ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ong-term they can get serious diseases. Moreover smoking is waste of money, averagely, p...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oducts create billions of dollars a year and lots of jobs so it can be consider a...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d lots of jobs so it can be consider as a important part of economy. if we ban it...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...onsider as a important part of economy. if we ban it what we receive is a hundread...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...onsider as a important part of economy. if we ban it what we receive is a hundread...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'plays'?
Suggestion: plays
... smoking has a lot of harm but it still play a role in our society, we can not compl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, while, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82304526749 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76556682016 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662551440329 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3208914278 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.545454545 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133904466701 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488509386274 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252917931324 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713406774553 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288176672541 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Many people know about the disadvantages of smoking,...
^^
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ountry, a number of lung cancer cases is recorded every year, almost of them are ...
^^
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ong-term they can get serious diseases. Moreover smoking is waste of money, averagely, p...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oducts create billions of dollars a year and lots of jobs so it can be consider a...
^^
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d lots of jobs so it can be consider as a important part of economy. if we ban it...
^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...onsider as a important part of economy. if we ban it what we receive is a hundread...
^^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...onsider as a important part of economy. if we ban it what we receive is a hundread...
^^
Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'plays'?
Suggestion: plays
... smoking has a lot of harm but it still play a role in our society, we can not compl...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, while, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82304526749 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76556682016 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662551440329 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3208914278 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.545454545 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133904466701 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488509386274 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252917931324 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713406774553 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288176672541 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.