Nowadays, teenagers have significantly different lifestyles to fifty years ago. However, some
aspects of adolescent life have not changed.
Discuss the similarities and differences in the lives of young people now and half a century
ago.
Recently, the lives of young people have dramatically changed since five decades ago. In contrast, In this essay, I will compare and contrast youngsters lifestyles in the half a century ago and now.
Perhaps the main similarities between the current and previous lifestyles of teenagers relate to the term of education. In the past, most children rarely got the chance to educate, especially the agricultural families. However, it has changed with technological advancement, which has helped children broaden their knowledge. Another similarity is in health. This is because, due to technological advancement, young people these days spend too much time surfing the internet, which causes a lack of physical activity. As a result, those habits can lead to significant weight gain.
On the other hand, there are some differences between fifty years ago and now in the lives of teenagers. Perhaps the main difference is in relationships. Children do not have parental support. This is because, parents are losing the balance between work and family life, which makes young people conflicted and unstable. Another difference is independence. In the past, children heavily relied on their parents in almost everything. Until now, teenagers have the freedom to travel and choose to study in a place far away from their home, which makes them more independent when they live alone.
In conclusion, there are many similarities and differences between current and previous teenagers' lifestyles. The main similarities are education and health, and the main differences are relationships and independence. In my opinion, there are more similarities than differences in the lives of young people.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47709923664 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02027075428 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56106870229 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4154602627 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7222222222 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5555555556 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382124726356 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106365369761 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856678850322 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224039886712 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853596382376 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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