Earlier technological developments offered more benefits to ordinary people than the current ones ever will.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is unarguable that technology has permeated every aspect of human’s lives. While numerous people hold the belief that the developments of earlier technology have brought larger changes in comparison to those of modern, I believe primary or advanced innovations have their own specific impacts which are uneven to be compared and both play an important role in our life.
The primary technological advances have caused changes in people’s earlier ways of living. It is believed that the appearance of the economy coincided with the evolution of technology, due to the unprecedented leap in productivity and by extension, wealth. Giving illustration, prior to these innovations, people were mainly manual labour workers and thus, the amount of production was very low. However, when modern machines were applied in human’s activities, the production output has witnessed an exponential increase, leading to improve people’s living standards. With the technological evolution, humans’ ability to earn a living has enhanced and people have explored different values in life.
On the basis of earlier technology, recent developments have acquired and made a great influence on human’s society. Technological latest breakthroughs have drastically transformed into the other sides of people’s lives. The distance between people from all over the world has been reduced and lots of social perceptions have changed due to the exposure of various cultures. Moreover, the widespread use of mobile laptops along with the advent coming of the Internet has ushered in an era where knowledge is at everybody’s disposal. By providing a wealth of precious information, it helps people broaden their knowledge in many indispensable fields, such as recognizing natural threats to humans and finding solutions for crucial issues these days.
In conclusion, although both early and recent progress in technology contributes to the betterment of our lives, I am in favour of the opinion that those initial advances play a crucial role. And as a matter of fact, technology will continuously develop for our better life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55864197531 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05850805104 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1750634633 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.642857143 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133530273331 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518914693873 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388415248599 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08562428546 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00643215356178 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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