Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane.
Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain:
• where and when you lost your bag
• what your bag looks like
• what its contents were
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you about my hand luggage, that I had left on your plane.I would like your airlines to help in retrieving my lost luggage.
I had taken a flight from London to Vancouver on last Wednesday aboard flight 5EY10. The flight flew from London at 0600 hours and arrived at Vancouver at 1900 hours. During the flight I had kept my bag under the seat and while de-boarding the flight, I collected my luggage from the overhead bins but forgot to collect my bag from under the seat, which I noticed only after I had arrived at my home.
The bag is a regular backpack from American Tourister(Blue Colour). It had a tag with my name and address attached to it, in case someone finds it they can contact me directly using that. And there is a keychain hanging form the side in the form of a shield. The contents include a HP Probook S300 laptop along with it's charger, a powerbank and a pair of sunglasses.
I would really appreciate if my bag would be found and retruned to me. If you need any more information don't hesitate to contact me using my mail. Expecting to hear a positive reply from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Gaurav Upadhyay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... luggage, that I had left on your plane.I would like your airlines to help in ret...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... help in retrieving my lost luggage. I had taken a flight from London to Vanco...
^
Line 9, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... bag would be found and retruned to me. If you need any more information dont hesi...
^^
Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...to me. If you need any more information dont hesitate to contact me using my mail. E...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54166666667 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48202989379 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615740740741 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9945341884 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.75 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27434587457 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900850708882 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829717321662 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1591829918 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107656688415 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.