Some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and homeless people. Do you agree or disagree?
In the industrial revolution 4.0, the rate of unemployment and lack of habitat has been increasing at an alarming rate. Some people agree with the fact that the authority must take care of stand-off and vagrant people. I completely agree with the argument that the government should take appropriate steps to improve the lifestyle of disadvantaged persons.
First of all, it is essential that everyone should be treated equally, and they all deserve that opportunity in this society. The state is a leader, every decision they make will have a great impact on citizens' lives later. Therefore, it is the responsibility of the politicians to empathize with people and provide them with enough facilities, which can support them financially and emotionally. For instance, they upgrade the work progress in the factory by buying robots to replace humans while reducing labor costs. This has inadvertently made many people unemployed.
Another point to consider is mental illnesses and crime in society due to due to the gap between the rich and the poor. If the government does not take this issue seriously, it will lead to very serious consequences for the younger generations. As a result, when they are exhausted in health and are no longer able to work and this, in the long run, will be converted to poverty. In addition, it will cause the children who are suffering these consequences to commit crimes in order to get a raw meal throughout the day. For example, in South Africa, unemployment had led to problems of health conditions and crime, which has led the country to struggle for development.
In conclusion, I find that when we say this, the people of all countries will always support it. In addition, there are many people who volunteer to donate money to the government to save the poor people out there. So, I strongly feel that the government should plan their policies properly taking all these people into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99691358025 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83319716448 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58950617284 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0251530975 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.1875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267082227997 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841785407138 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899388554905 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173050257905 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112058855002 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.