please help me I need it in 6 hours. : "Youth generation in Covid19"
* From the early days of the fight against covid ,Vietnamese youth has been indicated zealously volunteer spirit with plentiful activities .
* They join hands with the country to resist and overcome the obstacles and difficulties caused by the epidemic .
* With a high sense of responsibility and the youth enthusiasm , adolescents have buckled down optimistically and shoulder to shoulder with the authorities to conduct covid-19 control and prevention .
* That spirit has been broadened and expanded through the streets , alleys throughout all our territories.
* Heroes pictures wearing blue armors are powerful , independent and sustainable with desires to help our country get out of crisis .
* Outstanding work is on duty at checkpoints ,volunteers will contribute with medical staff to abide by checking spot guides ,provide the supplies , use anti-bacterial spray , take temperatures , do health declaration for citizens .
* Volunteers will observe the sectors , wont let strangers come into locked zones , assist people having medical problems ….
* They have temporarily had to live away from their family and relatives,counteract inclement weather , do constantly the assignments having high infection risks by interacting with Confirmed patient .
* Although the mission is hard and unfortunate , the soldiers still rush into the epidemic center ,contend for community service.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he early days of the fight against covid ,Vietnamese youth has been indicated zeal...
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...lunteer spirit with plentiful activities . * They join hands with the country to ...
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... and difficulties caused by the epidemic . * With a high sense of responsibility ...
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...ictures wearing blue armors are powerful , independent and sustainable with desire...
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...es to help our country get out of crisis . * Outstanding work is on duty at check...
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...anti-bacterial spray , take temperatures , do health declaration for citizens . *...
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...res , do health declaration for citizens . * Volunteers will observe the sectors ...
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...iers still rush into the epidemic center ,contend for community service.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.00507614213 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30599023945 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.736040609137 0.561755894193 131% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7343213614 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.444444444 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0366008940136 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0146621797184 0.084324248473 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0208737050049 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0146621797184 0.151304729494 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208737050049 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.58 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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