Write to your neighbor because the disturbance of your flat:
In your letter you should say:
-what the problem is
-explain the situation you have
-apologize with them
-and say what action you will take.
Dear Mr. Smith,
My name is Dais Naile. My door number is six and, I live next to you. I’m writing concerning all the disturbance I’ve caused to you. I’ve never received any warning letter for a long time up-to-date. It’s not my intention to make you feel more uncomfortable. I know you are good neighbors, and I wouldn’t like you to move to another flat.
First of all, I’ve had problems with my washer machine, the connection to the main pipe is annoying. Since I moved down here, many aspects regarding this problem have cost me a lot of effort. However, renting is cheaper than other places I saw before. Besides, a terrible smell comes out every night. Also, I haven’t had the opportunity of having a nice sleeping night.
Secondly, I would like to apologize for any inconvenience to your private life. I will address some arrangements taking into account the time of working conditions with the plumber for next week. As I know you will be on vacation. That would be a suitable moment for putting an end to this awkward situation. That’s why I’m letting you know that this mistake I’ve committed won’t happen again.
Finally, I hope you accept my apologies. Please do not hesitate to contact me directly, if there’s something else you would like to share.
Yours sincerely,
Naile.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, however, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, you know, as well as, first of all, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88510638298 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62317560392 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68085106383 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3826189301 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.75 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6875 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 4.34317383033 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27586615818 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874302761938 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617930220776 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144840860877 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813790869177 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.