Many people believe that today’s society is becoming less and less polite. What is you opinion on this?
Nowadays, people think that society is turning less and less polite. I think I agree with this opinion because people today are becoming more easy. This essay I try to discuss the reasons why I think this and provide some examples.
In big city many people using the subway for travel and many people not care for special need person. People have no time to think for other people so they are less polite. For example, people in go train today not care for lady carry child. Teenage boy will not get up and give seat to her to sit. People today in busy life don’t care for other family member too.
The life today is making people not respect for nature also. They throw rubbish on beach and camp ground. When parents do this type of work child also learning this not respect for the world. For example when I travel to another place for holiday I tell my child to care for the world and not throw garbage. But, my friend he never tell his children and so they just throw chewing gum in the road or he throw cigarate from his car. This is clear some people have no respect for nature.
In total, I think people are living for their life and they are forget we are sharing the same place, same air and same world. Everywhere we see people are less polite to people and the nature. If this continue the world will become bad place in 50 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...is making people not respect for nature also. They throw rubbish on beach and camp g...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tells'.
Suggestion: tells
... throw garbage. But, my friend he never tell his children and so they just throw che...
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Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'throws'.
Suggestion: throws
...ust throw chewing gum in the road or he throw cigarate from his car. This is clear so...
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Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
... are living for their life and they are forget we are sharing the same place, same air...
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Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e less polite to people and the nature. If this continue the world will become bad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33464566929 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.80021164909 2.80592935109 64% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523622047244 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8965475058 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.7647058824 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.29411764706 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272577656582 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105165203372 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960120359558 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192511878247 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995705304295 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.0946893788 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 12.4159519038 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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