In some countries, people need to own a home rather than rent one. This essay will point out the reasons for this case and examine if this situation is positive or negative.
People prefer owning a home to renting one for the following reasons. First, owning a home means eliminating rental expenses. Instead of paying costly rental expenses every month or every quarter, they can spend their money on more valuable things or save for their plans. Second, mortgage loans offered by banks are attractive and affordable in some countries nowadays, while rental fees are becoming more expensive and unnecessary for people who want to settle down. This lead to the assumption that owning a home is more crucial than renting one.
I think this is more of a favourable situation. First, when people borrow money from banks to buy houses, they contribute to the growth of the banks and, therefore, the overall growth of the economy. However, every coin has two sides. When the demand for home-owning increases, home prices will be boosted. Consequently, there may be fewer people who can afford a house.
In conclusion, the phenomenon of people preferring to own a home to renting one is reasonable. I believe that this is a desirable situation as it will boost the economy's growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83690987124 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50869291222 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549356223176 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5030317211 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6923076923 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415016768939 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167495121429 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112752161369 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296110515788 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941712270015 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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