Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With the rapid development of technology, computers are likely to surpass humans in intelligence. It is argued that this evolution brings benefits along with drawbacks. In my perspective, advancements in this technology will bring significant improvements to our lives.
To begin with, it is undeniably helpful for humans as computers become more sophisticated. First of all, they have made life easier and more convenient for everyone. Because everything is interconnected via the internet, working and studying have become extremely easy and convenient. Unlike the old days, now, people can get access to their school or work without having to go out. Students and employees can connect through email, online networks, and video calls. It is especially beneficial during the Covid-19 pandemic as social distancing must be followed seriously. Furthermore, computer machines, such as robots, can work in hazardous environments where humans cannot. For example, they can go beneath the sea, study volcanoes, and do a variety of other tasks.
This progress, on the other hand, brings disadvantages. It has the potential to impact the balance of society. For instance, offices may be canceled in the future, and virtual online offices may take their place. As a result, people could become extremely sluggish, which critically affects the way humans develop in the lack of socialization skills. Additionally, instead of humans, these supercomputers can be recruited to work in industries. As a result, the unemployment rate will climb dramatically, creating crime and discontent in society.
To summarize, while some people are concerned about the threats that AI may cause to the world, I personally feel that the advantages outweigh any disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52788104089 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13586346447 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650557620818 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2011659538 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.6111111111 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9444444444 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166334060427 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454634042311 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402292063169 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901120372394 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148344878879 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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