Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend,while others do not . Discuss both views and give opinion
our modern life today has led to changes in our eating style. fast food come into our lives and gradually reduced the role of traditional food. We all know that the nutritional value of homemade and traditional foods is much higher than that of fast food. While some people assume that fast food has the considerable benefit of low-cost and time-saving, I believe that fast food brings detrimental effects rather than advantages to people.
Firstly, obesity is one of the problems caused by eating junk food. In fact, many of these foods are harmful to human health, make one obese and greatly increase the chances of developing diabets and heart attack. Moreover, according to experts from the American vegetarian Association, eating fast food more than once a week lead to obesity, especially localised obesity in part of abdomen.
Secondly and even more importantly, fast food have a low nutritional value in terms of vitamins and minerals needed by the body. In other words, lack of nutritional value is one of the problems that threatens children and adolescent, in adulthood. Therefore, if a child deficient in nutrients at an early age, he or she will certainly have this problem during adolescence.
Finally, most of fast food are fried and usually low quality oils are used to fry these foods.Thus, the percentage of fatty acids in these oils is high. this fat is harmful fat that can build up in the walls of the arteries and block them.
In conclusion, it is clear that fast food has a negative impact on modern life due to lack of nutritional value and having harmful fats, which bring up obesity.
- Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular Some feel that this is a positive trend while others do not Discuss both views and give opinion 73
- Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular Some feel that this is a positive trend while others do not Discuss both views and give opinion 73
- Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular Some feel that this is a positive trend while others do not Discuss both views and give opinion 73
- Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular Some feel that this is a positive trend while others do not Discuss both views and give opinion 66
- Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular Some feel that this is a positive trend while others do not Discuss both views and give opinion 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86909090909 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63746434702 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7449557702 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164425236897 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583216163308 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036685276639 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833591520498 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350204718429 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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