some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
Discuss summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparison wherever necessary
Humans evolved to an extent to differentiate eachother by plethora of ways such as language, culture, and tradition however, music reaches people beyond the boundaries of men. I completely agree that music is a beautiful medium to bring people of all ages and culture under one roof.
Music has a healing nature which might console people in times of pain and sorrow. For instance, in recent days COVID pandemic caused a global lockdown with people panicking in their homes, isolated, hopeless and deserted, in situations like this people supported eachother by singing and playing music through their windows. This movement gained a massive following, so many desperate people had their movements of hope in such a devestating situation.
Similarly, after the bombing of Hiroshima and Nagasaki in Japan, the country lost the war and although people lost their loved ones and wept their days, their hope was re-established with the help of patriotric music and it helped to envision the future to be a better place than now.
Music is an universal language, music has a tendancy to activate certain areas of the brain, responsible for the reward center which secretes happy hormones such as dopamine. No boundaries can restriant music, people love music irrespective of their age, it brings nostalgic memories to the elderly whereas teenagers create their long lasting memories with music.
To conclude, the reason why music has such a great impact on human brains might go long back when ancient humans learnt to appreciate music before the origin of language.Hence, music has so much wonderful abilities beyond human knowledge and understanding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, similarly, so, whereas, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27169811321 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72583463169 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.2158808199 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.222222222 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4444444444 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195038613329 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963545010865 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520899354946 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11513629029 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601308738913 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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