Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
The speaker contends that men's and women's tasks are divided based on their physical inheritance. I concede that naturally different abilities are given to men and women which leads them to a balanced world. In some respect, however, due to development of various factor, women and men are equally capable if they work on it persistently.
Admittedly, naturally physical dichotomy between male and female is for various tasks which compliments each other. To create a balanced world one is needed for another. For instance, to give birth to a children women has made up while men are also equally important in making the process happen. Moreover, various research have substantiated that women are inherently emotionally intelligent while men are physically. That research also concludes that women can perform better where it comes to emotion related work such as nurses, doctor while men are more efficient when it comes to work related to physical tasks such as labor, engineer. Thus, nature has distinguished men's and women's proficiency based on physical inherent.
However, with the advancement in technology and resources, men and women have equally become capable of working any task and are no more bounded to tasks based on gender. For example, before many decades, women were not considered to be able to play games such as soccer, football, volleyball just because it required lots of strength. And based on orthodox belief women are more into weaker side in terms of physical inheritance. This has changed all because of the knowledge about muscles and energy required can be gained through continuous exercises. Therefore, women have become more participating in the sports which used to be men's sport. Not only women, men are also into tasks such as daycare, nursing which was once thought to be women based work. Due to awareness and advancement, the gender based task division is not prevalent in today's generation.
Also, in twenty first century, gender is not divided to just men and women. Therefore, dividing work based on gender is not acceptable in the current scenario. There are many LGBT right which protects gender based discrimination.
To sum, the statement correctly states the physical difference in men and women are not equally suited for all tasks naturally. However, due to advancement of technology, these divided tasks based on gender are no longer accepted. Moreover, there are many human right organization who are fighting for gender roles which are not bound to male and female. Therefore, the statement is not completely acceptable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
...evalent in todays generation. Also, in twenty first century, gender is not divided to just ...
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Line 4, column 23, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...days generation. Also, in twenty first century, gender is not divided to just men and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20963855422 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73837584692 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493975903614 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3240041454 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0434782609 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26086956522 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440040554962 0.243740707755 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124339536515 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958231153201 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248642213429 0.150359130593 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859042205417 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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