Some people believe that children should spend all of their full time with their families. Other believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is certainly true that majority of student are suffering from their education stress. To maintain balance in leisure time is vital. Many people argue that student should mandatory to spend their full leisure time with their family member. However, other think that it's not compulsory spend with their family but other activity is also important. This essay will be analyzed both these position before reaching reasonable conclusion.
The first and foremost reason why people think that student spend their leisure time with their family, because family member learn about different skill as cooking, cleaning and many others. It can be seen that every student learn about their cooking skill from their parents. For example, almost 85% pupil learn this skill from their mother. Apart from this, Grandparent as well as parent can learn about different history story, which can help to improve student's education. Recently, a survey done by Times Of India show that almost 70% student in India learn history from their family member. Thus, spending all leisure time with family, children learn about different skill as cooking, cleaning and learn history from their family member.
However, on the flip side of coin, student do not spend their all leisure time with family, but spend time in different activities. Firstly, student can spend their leisure time with their neighbor, they learn about sharing and caring creativity from their friends. For example, children can play a cricket, but some cricket accessories do not effort to buy due to that any friend can learn about sharing skill from games. Moreover, student can share their few time in the internet, they can learn about latest technology arrived in the world. For example, nowadays almost 90% teenager learn about new technology in within few hours from using of internet.
In recapitulation, although there are two contrasting view regarding student's leisure time, as far as I am concerned that not only spend leisure time with family but other activities is equally important for learn about different skill as sharing and caring as well as learn new technology for using of internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...ames. Moreover, student can share their few time in the internet, they can learn about l...
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Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
...ew time in the internet, they can learn about latest technology arrived in the world. For ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, apart from, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19827586207 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31163649774 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465517241379 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5623627515 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.411764706 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267541446653 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121823990505 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891403676871 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195649144228 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812682569332 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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