Living in an apartment instead of a university dormitory has advantages and disadvantages. Discuss some advantages and disadvantages of apartment living. Then state and defend your preferences.
One of the concerns of many university students is accommodation. They should decide whether to live in the university dormitory or rent an apartment out of the campus. The primary factors influencing their decision are the distance to university and accessibility of transportation facilities, household amenities such as internet connection and laundry, and a student friendly atmosphere. Comparing the advantages and disadvantages of apartment housings to dormitory, I prefer living in university dorm.
When renting an apartment, its proximity to university is of significant importance because...
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