Online work has become more advanced these days with increment in technological aspects. Many individuals share their details online for signing up for social apps and banking sites. It is a positive development because onile banking save people time and any person communicate with others very easily. I will discussed my views insubsequent paragraphs.
To embark with, there are several positive development of online signing but the first and foremost positive development is time saving. To make it more clear, if people use online apps for transections like sending money to other people so, it save individuals time because when a person do not use onile apps so, going bank is compulsery for person. A survey was conducted in USA and their authority obtain online work commit by 95% masses to save their time. As a result, online banking has gained lot of popularity.
Moving furthur, social networking increase communication skills. In other words, if a person signing on any social app and put their information on this app so, they can talk with other people very easily and know about other culture, which help the people to increase communication skill. Meanmwhile, people send docouments very easily to other perison and now online work are very protected and safe.
In conclusion, there are numerous postive development of online work such as time saving and shareing docouments easily to other places. Nowadays, online website are protected by government so, people could safely use them.
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- Companies use a variety of methods to improve the sales of their products What are those methods Which is the most effective method 56
- Topic many people put their personal information online address telephone number and so on for purposes such as signing up for social networks or online banking Is this a positive or negative development 56
- Some people think that managers alone should make decisions in the company while others think that employees should be involved in the decision making process too Discuss both views and give your own opinion 74
- Many claim that the fast food industry had a negative effect on the environment eating habits and families To what extend do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'discuss'
Suggestion: discuss
...unicate with others very easily. I will discussed my views insubsequent paragraphs. To...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'saves'?
Suggestion: saves
...ke sending money to other people so, it save individuals time because when a person ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22633744856 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68771855959 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559670781893 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7874582153 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6923076923 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393745859089 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138395938958 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925387279545 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24699113377 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734765270492 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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