The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Actually I am not agree to this statement, because need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping can’t be limited. Every one need the travel. Work, education and shopping are needing. We can’t limited the needing, but government can be regulating the transportation. The government can be regulating a transportation, specially public transportation. The government can to take the tax Personal transportation with hight cose, and free or pay the public transportation but not expensive. This only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities.
Learn to some countries like Singapore and others. Much of people go to office, school with public transportation. This transportation have not traffic way. Every one happy to this transportation. For reduce the amount of traffic in cities need the comprehensip solution. Repair the public transportation and expand the street. One side need for people to travel from home to shopping can be using internet. So, not much people on the street. But if the people need to travel they can use public transportation.
The other solution to reduce the amount of traffic in cities are people not only in one city but they can live and work in other cities or towns. The people can to work in towns. The government make regulating to regulate they country. Citizen can enjoy the rules of government.
In Indonesia, specially in Jakarta traffic in cities its so crazy at the morning and afternoon. The cars moving with slowly. This happen because every one use personal transportation and and the street to little. So, the government please realize the best public transportation. Thankyou
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Actually I am not agree to this statement,
Actually I do not agree to this statement,
because need for people to travel from home for work
because the need for people to travel from home for work
Sentence: Every one need the travel.
Description: The fragment one need the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace need with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: We can't limited the needing, but government can be regulating the transportation.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to cannot and limited
The government can to take the tax
The government can take the tax
Every one happy to this transportation.
Every one is happy to this transportation.
Sentence: For reduce the amount of traffic in cities need the comprehensip solution.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to For and reduce
Sentence: The government make regulating to regulate they country.
Description: The fragment government make regulating is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to they and country
its so crazy
it's so crazy
Sentence: This happen because every one use personal transportation and and the street to little.
Description: The fragment This happen because is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace happen with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to use and personal
Description: The token and is not usually followed by a conjunction, coordinating
Suggestion: Refer to and and and
Sentence: The government can to take the tax Personal transportation with hight cose, and free or pay the public transportation but not expensive.
Error: cose Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: hight Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: For reduce the amount of traffic in cities need the comprehensip solution.
Error: comprehensip Suggestion: comprehensive
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