Question Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released Why is this the case What can be done to solve this problem

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In todays modern era,crime rates are increasing day by day it is n...
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...are increasing day by day it is not good .It os necessary for government to contro...
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...ary for government to control the crimes .However ,recent experiment explain that...
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...y for government to control the crimes .However ,recent experiment explain that the co...
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...overnment to control the crimes .However ,recent experiment explain that the coll...
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...l the crimes .However ,recent experiment explain that the collection of culprits ...
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...ain that the collection of culprits are send to the jail commit crimes after they ar...
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...e jail commit crimes after they are left .Well I shall discuss stop the crimes bec...
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...jail commit crimes after they are left .Well I shall discuss stop the crimes because...
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...scuss stop the crimes because it is very hazardous for the public life .I shall d...
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...t is very hazardous for the public life .I shall discuss this essay in the upcomi...
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...the upcoming paragraphs To begin with,the cause of high recidivism rates are incr...
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... are increasing criminals send to prison .Firstly criminals habit they always comm...
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...re increasing criminals send to prison .Firstly criminals habit they always commit crim...
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...se they think crimes are not big problem .So they always commit offence .Secondly,...
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... they think crimes are not big problem .So they always commit offence .Secondly,mo...
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...g problem .So they always commit offence .Secondly,most of the people are not happ...
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...problem .So they always commit offence .Secondly,most of the people are not happy in the...
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....So they always commit offence .Secondly,most of the people are not happy in their li...
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...o wrong direction and commit many crimes .For example,sucha was a famous gangster ...
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...wrong direction and commit many crimes .For example,sucha was a famous gangster in ...
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...tion and commit many crimes .For example,sucha was a famous gangster in punjab and he ...
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...ommited many crimes On the other hand ,there are many solutions stop to crimes...
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...mes On the other hand ,there are many solutions stop to crimes .however, crimi...
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...there are many solutions stop to crimes .however, criminals sell in the prison .F...
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...s .however, criminals sell in the prison .Furthermore, government provide many ski...
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....however, criminals sell in the prison .Furthermore, government provide many skills in jail...
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...de many skills in jail such as education,disciplane,responsibilities and so on .And also, b...
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...on,disciplane,responsibilities and so on .And also, because it is very helpful for...
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...elpful for the criminals who are in jail .Thirdly, they are released in the jail s...
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...pful for the criminals who are in jail .Thirdly, they are released in the jail so they ...
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...es is not good for me and another people .Finally, people go to right track and un...
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...discussed about the reasons and solution .The problem why criminals commit crime,l...
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...scussed about the reasons and solution .The problem why criminals commit crime,lack...
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... .The problem why criminals commit crime,lack of employment ,financial problem .And t...
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...riminals commit crime,lack of employment ,financial problem .And the solution is t...
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...me,lack of employment ,financial problem .And the solution is to solve this issue ...
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...,lack of employment ,financial problem .And the solution is to solve this issue cri...
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...criminals they can become a good person in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, such as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02316602317 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2441578045 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521235521236 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 259.0 20.2975951904 1276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1301.0 106.682146367 1220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 259.0 20.7667163134 1247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 155.0 7.06120827912 2195% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309962482992 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.309962482992 0.084324248473 368% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193991595672 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564827142782 0.056905535591 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 131.7 13.0946893788 1006% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -191.41 50.2224549098 -381% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 104.3 11.3001002004 923% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.32 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.41 8.58950901804 226% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 105.6 10.1190380762 1044% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 10.7795591182 501% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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