In the 21st century, many women have come out of their home to become what we call working women.
Do you agree with this approach?
Nowadays, women are becoming professional with the passage of every day. They are not only limited to the four walls of the home but are exploring various possibilities in the outer world. Though many people hold a perspective that females should stick to the homes to nurture the kids and the families, yet I assert that they should leave their homes in search of bread and butter to support their husbands as well.
Primarily, our society respects those who are working, earning money and maintaining a financial status. Women are not treated nicely since history because they were not allowed to win bread for the family and hence were always dominated by others. So, to gain respect in the society, I believe that women should hesistate in working outside the homes. Moreover, it boosts their self-confidence and they can feed their families in the tough times as well. For instance, if their husband is dead, they need not to look at someone to support them financially, despite they can take the ownership and serve for their family.
Secondarily, women are now emphasising more on the gender equality which means that they should not mind feeding their husbands and families. If the family belongs to both, then according to me, the responsibilites should also be mutual and there are very few females who understand this and support their partners rather than becoming a gossip queen at home. What is more? A child will always proud of a working mother and hence I think all the women should work and put their brains on productive use.
In contrast, it is argued by some people that women should not be sent to the workplaces as this will impact their families. On this, I would like to say that women are capable to manage both their families and official work at the same time and hence they should not be stopped. Anyhow, this will bring wealth to the home in this era of inflation.
In conclusion, while some critics have an opinion that working woman may not be able to maintain a balance between her family and her profession, Yet I assert that they should be given a chance to support their families and make their offspring proud on themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'look'?
Suggestion: look
...if their husband is dead, they need not to look at someone to support them financially,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, then, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78191489362 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47135582071 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4419187119 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.375 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23345907643 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885805910154 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441431457023 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14315085691 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494347200584 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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