The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, sense and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not beneficial in organize small fry age group for modern life. I balance.
Because traditional ideas are also very relevant to today’s society into some cases. The rest of the current customs are to appropriate, but we should not negate all the media ideals of the ancient.
For traditional ideas may not be suitable for us in modern life but that means it is not useful. Why do we say that? . Each place, each person, each family will have their own traditions, no matter what generation or life we live in, we must respect the traditions of others. For example, like the old traditions that adults teach their children to take things with both hands or to invite others to eat. In my view, I find traditional ideals great.
For today's traditions are of course also suitable for this modern life. I think reason many people traditional ideas are not suitable because nowadays more and more young people follow many new traditions and there are many families too, not all families hold traditional ideals. Therefore, the world is divided into two extremes, following the traditional ideal and not following the tradition.
In the future, I hope everyone can respect each other's ideas.
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- The bar chart and the pie chart compare pineapple exports by the top three pineapple producing countries between 2009 and 2019 as well as a breakdown of each pineapple s consumer cost in 2019
- The bar chart and the pie chart compare pineapple exports by the top three pineapple producing countries between 2009 and 2019 as well as a breakdown of each pineapple s consumer cost in 2019
- The bar chart and the pie chart compare pineapple exports by the top three pineapple producing countries between 2009 and 2019 as well as a breakdown of each pineapple s consumer cost in 2019
- The bar chart and the pie chart compare pineapple exports by the top three pineapple producing countries between 2009 and 2019 as well as a breakdown of each pineapple s consumer cost in 2019
- The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live sense and behave However some people believe that these ideas are not beneficial in organize small fry age group for modern life I balance 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: .
...s it is not useful. Why do we say that? . Each place, each person, each family wi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, for example, i think, of course, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92592592593 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55024304963 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.1162990939 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6363636364 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225769946098 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786252953089 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682588405749 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113757220399 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067764951585 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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