Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in reference to the advertisement you placed in the local newspaper for waiters and waitresses. I am confident that my experience as an energetic and hardworking customer service professional will provide the skills you are looking for.
Currently, I working as a waitress in the Four Season Hotel restaurant in my hometown. I have been working here for the past 2 years. My main duties are help the chef by performing duties like serving customers and cleaning the restaurant. I am also responsible for counting up takings at the end of the day.
I pride myself on welcoming and engaging each customer in a friendly manner, responding quickly to their needs and efficiently resolving any concerns they may have. I would be very grateful if I could be considered for the position. I am available for interview at next Monday.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yous faithfully,
Chirs Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
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Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a friendly manner" with adverb for "friendly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...on welcoming and engaging each customer in a friendly manner, responding quickly to their needs and ...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y resolving any concerns they may have. I would be very grateful if I could be co...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I could be considered for the position. I am available for interview at next Mond...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98181818182 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00159737088 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70303030303 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5439592698 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274510215415 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940492635682 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854756769102 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164061096712 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629691337306 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.