Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to request an extension to the deadline for returning two books which I borrowed from the college library last week but I am afraid cannot return them in time.
The due date to return these books is two days later. Unfortunately, I just received my grandmother has been admitted to the hospital in my hometown due to her heart failure. After I received the bad news, I catch a flight to return to my hometown immediately. I will probably stay in my hometown for a couple of days. Therefore, I cannot return these two books in time. I will return the books at the beginning of the next week.
I sincerely request you not to impose a penalty or late fee on me considering the grave situation and my previous borrowing records.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours Faithfully,
Chris Wong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, therefore, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 711.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67763157895 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7505272096 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618421052632 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6953576252 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277233893621 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109278563639 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085586408536 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16617822141 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577828753316 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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