Taking part in sports is important for an adult's health and happiness. To what extent do you agree with it?
Recently, the phenomenon of taking part in sport and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although
contested by many that the matter of adults health is highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded thoroughly both
constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that young and old peopele can be a
plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, physical health can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the
fact that merits, as well as advantages of world health and happiness , are crucial. According to my own experience, I performed an
academic experiment which discovered the importance of the keep fit . Thus, beneficial ramifications of taking regular are
visible.
Within the realm of science, publice health can provide the community with negative impacts that are related to this
reality that the demerits of medical care are remarkable. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken
by a prestigious university has described the role of keeping fit body. Hence, predicted outcomes of going on a diet are noticeable.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the
benefits of regime far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of strict prove the significance of healthy,
but also pinpoint possible implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., the phenomenon of taking part in sport and its corresponding impact has sparked...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...advantages of world health and happiness , are crucial. According to my own experi...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...iscovered the importance of the keep fit . Thus, beneficial ramifications of takin...
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Line 13, column 85, Rule ID: PROVE_PROOF[2]
Message: Did you mean 'proof' (noun) instead of prove (verb)?
Suggestion: proof
...s. Not only do the advantages of strict prove the significance of healthy, but also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43555555556 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05389624703 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1127146689 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.181818182 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.12807881773 315% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191814429996 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539920880137 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479544293072 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0490708466309 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504797862137 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.