Parents and teachers make many rules to encourage good behaviour and to protect them from danger. However, children would benefits from fewer rules and greater freedom. To what extent you agree or disagree?

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Parents and teachers make many rules to encourage good behaviour and to protect them from danger. However, children would benefits from fewer rules and greater freedom. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Children are considered to be most vulnerable part of society, it is very essential for a child to become a responsible citizen when he grows up. Now the question arises that whether children can groom better by implying more rules from their guardians side or they can bloom better by having more freedom.

I vehemently see eye-to-eye with the latter statement that a child should be given more space. Embarking with the reasons, first and foremost, nowadays children are sharper in every aspect as compared to the past ones. To elaborate, technology has enabled them with ample means to explore w...

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Children are considered to be most vulnerable part
Children are considered to be the most vulnerable part

neither we can support nor go against two sides completely
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